Greetings. I am an amateur editor who believes that brevity is the soul of wit but immersion requires specifics. There are hardly any films that can't be made better by trimming a few minutes and every novel could stand to be reduced by a dozen pages or more. As Mr. King says in 'On Writing', "Kill your darlings." I'm a supporter of the Oxford Comma and, in rare cases, the semi-colon. Just don't abuse them. I am probably best suited to edit long-form fiction and am open to plots involving romance, incest, lesbians, power play, exhibitionism, all the various manifestations of hetero sex and even horror, bestiality or fisting. I won't be much use to you if your story contains blood, scat, piss, vomit or hardcore gay sex as those topics have little appeal for me. I will edit stories for grammar, spelling, some style and I am particularly good at recognizing plot holes, continuity errors or poor character motivations. If your story uses a significant number of drawn out words, (I.e, fuuuuuuuck meeeeeeeeeeeeee!) we can't be friends. You will also find I am particularly harsh on the over-use of bra sizes, cock measurements and semen quantities as I regard these forms of description as superfluous.