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It will be nice feeling
your body pressed against me
as we lay in be and make
long lasting love, listening
to our synchronized breath,
enjoying how our voices are lost
in each other's mouths. Feeling our
tongues battle, and our scences blast as
we touch and push into each other.
II.
It is nice now the smell
of the ocean, and the sound of
the waves crashing. The water feels cool
as it surrounds my bare feet and your
knees. My cock feels great embedded in
your mouth, and I can see your nipples
getting hard thanks to the caressing
of the wind. I get jelous of it, but only
for a little bit. Your mouth steals away
my attention, as you moan around my member
and once again I look down to notice your
fingers working their magic on your throbbing
clit. I see you shake and I cum.
III.
It was nice driving with you
the top open in my car, and the night wind
enveloping us. Your top removed, my fingers
massaging your breasts, squeezing your nipples.
You hiked up your skirt and even
though it was dark, I could still notice
the wet spot on you panties. I pulled the car
over. No cars in sight in the desolate
freeway. We moved to the back sit and you got
into position and bent over the car. Half
of your body outside, and your tits
freely hanging. My cock felt uncomfortable
in it's prison. I released it. No need
to think twice, so I plunged all the way into
you in one move. I did it hard and fast, and
you still came as well as I. I remember
remembering the whole drive your loud
moans, and your head moving side to side.
Your hair a mess, more
from sex than from the wind.
It has potential, and certainly could have used an edit. Keep writing! ~Minx
and i think it has lots of potential
but it could benefit from some editing,
or getting a literotica editor to look it
over, but all in all it's a very good effort
and that is just my opinion.
Keep writing.
~ J