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Click here‘Twas the night for pleasure, when all through the dungeon
Not a slave was stirring, even after each bludgeon
The chains were hung by the Sybian with care,
In hopes that Master soon would be there
The submissives were nestled all snug in their cuffs,
While visions of endorphins danced in their muffs
And Mistress in her latex, and Master in his leather
Had just settled down for a long winter’s tether
When over in the corner there arose such a scream
I sprang open my eyes to see who was getting creamed
Away my eyes turned and my head dropped in a flash
As Mistress tore into her Bottom with a lash
The bruise on the breast from the new-fallen welt
Gave the luster of red and purple with lines from the belt
When what to my downcast eyes should appear
But a new Master and eight slaves in tow at his rear
With a little old whip to snap my thatch
I knew in a moment I had just met my match
More rapid than a vibrator his floggers they came
And he punished, and whipped and paddled without vain
“Now clamp her! Now, gag her! Now, leash her and blindfold!
On nipple! On clit! On thigh with electrode!
To the top of the beams, to the top of the rack wall!
Now thrash away! thrash away! thrash away all!”
As dry cracks of the whips that before the endorphins fly
When they each sting when meeting skin, bring her to the sky
So up to the stars her brain hormones they flew
With the eight little slaves and Master too
And then, in a clanging, I heard before me
Mistress and her chained Bottom thrown to her knee
As I drew in my breath and looked up and around
Down the thong panties came with a bound
I was dressed all in nothing, from my head to my foot
And all the slaves were watching all flushed and black and blue as soot
A bundle of toys the slave had flung on her back
And she looked like Dr. Ruth just opening her bed sack
My eyes – how they brightened! My thoughts became merry!
My ass cheeks were as red as roses, my pussy without a cherry!
My mouth was gagged and forced open to the max
And the drool dripping on my chin made tracks
The stump of a dildo held tight in the slave’s teeth
And the sound, oh it drove my hips circling like a wreath
It had a large head and little balls made out of jelly
That shook, when she stuffed it right up into my belly
It was long and large, not a good size for an elf
And I moaned when I saw it, in spite of myself
A lick of the end and a twist of the head
Soon gave me to know I had pleasure instead
The slave spoke not a word, but went straight to her work
And filled my ass then turned it with a jerk
And laying her tongue alongside my nipple
The orgasm came in waves like a ripple
I sprang to my toes, to the slaves gave a wink
And the slave she continued to bring me to the brink
But I heard Master exclaim as I passed out from my plight
“HAPPY SPANKING TO ALL, AND TO ALL A FUCKING NIGHT!”
this was such a goofily good poem,,, i'm not into such BDSM?, with leather, belt, dog collars, etc., but the poem's visceralness and tongue in cheek nature made me started laughing from the second stanza onward,,,!
Thank you for all the hard work. This was an excellent piece of work!
This was far beyond the poem I expected from this site, surprisingly creative, vivid and visual, and erotic beyond belief. Most of the time I could not understand if the woman, the narrator, wanted the abuse, if it was voluntary or not, etc. The beginning sounded like this was something out of "8mm". I read it cringing, but saw every picture perfectly. Great fucking job! The last line is priceless, an instant masterpiece. Please, keep writing! You got a heck of a talent!!!!!!!!
I wanted to score higher because this really looks like you took a lot of time. The rhymes were excellent and didn't seemed forced, but the meter was off causing problems with the flow. But damn, this was hilarious!!
Thanks for the read, Dana
i have read a few of the poems on this site and so far, yours has been the best. i like poems that still rhyme and yours was wonderful. thank you