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Lovers

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jomar
jomar
62 Works
514 Followers

murmurs
whispers
and moans

gentle caresses
slapping flesh

moisture
slickness
and sweat

tender kisses
a loving gaze

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jomar
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SuzysboySuzysboyover 12 years ago

Sweet as Haiku...

starrkersstarrkersabout 16 years ago
Simple

and yet strongly evocative. Nicely done!

FallenfromgraceFallenfromgraceover 16 years ago
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I like that you chose your words well, a little insight into a moment already begun and almost over. I liked it :)

TarakinTarakinover 16 years ago
Very good!

Very good, I just don't understand why it's just "a" (one) loving gaze at the end.

glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
This one almost made me blush.

Like inadvertently interrupted a very intimate moment between two lovers.

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