Fly Alone

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  • October 2009 monthly contest
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_Lynn_
_Lynn_
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I gave you my heart
My soul opened to you
Aching to be yours
Believing your promises for more
Walking away, you left me
Without you, I’m lost
Someone, please tell me
How do I fly, alone?


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Author's note: I'm not a poet. I put words together, and hope others feel the emotion in them. Let me know what you think.

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Satyr61Satyr617 months ago

I LOVE THIS. So beautiful, sweet & it touched me deeply.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Powerful

Poet or not, these few lines nail it. Wonderfully powerful.

LovetolistenLovetolistenover 10 years ago
Very nice!

I like it very much, nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A rose by any other name

"Poets are damned, but they are not blind; they see with the eyes of angels"

--William Carlos Williams

Looks like a poem to me. Touched me like a poem, as well.

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