I read a lot and I write a bit (as a hobby). I have a fair amount of free time and would be happy to read what you have written and give feedback, edit grammar/spelling, etc. I will be honest, I probably can't give that great advice for actual sex scenes which is why I would prefer to edit plot heavy more romantic stories so that I can give better advice, but I don't mind reading sex-heavy stories for grammar/spelling/comprehensibility. I've noticed that some people have some problems with tenses and switching between persons in the narration. This can really take away from a story even if it has a great plot and characters. I would be happy to help you with that. Let me know what kind/level of help you are looking for in your email and I'll be sure to get back to you promptly!