2/14 2002 8:21 AM

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Liar
Liar
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dew wept
flowers swept
a trail

lavender longing

though
my morning

stirred
the tranquil
of you
beside

to escape
a mime
of a soothed sigh
parted lips smile

but not enough
commotion
to open eyes

i sit
serene
perfect stillness
paralysed

no place
no mind

just your face
asleep

and i

 

Liar
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A LOVERS DAY

begins anew. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Repose.

A beautiful poem about watching a loved one ~ asleep.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent word sketch of

Love serenely relished.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
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I'm glad you fixed the link- this is very sweet- Thanks!

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
Soft

Sometimes less is more. A beautiful painting.

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