a 4 am goodnight vow

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Liar
Liar
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tomorrow
I will try
to fall
in love

and do my very best
to bask in still
veiled glow

there
in the
reflection
of unexplored
eyes

make some kind of difference
have some kind of moment

experience
applaud
and lose my cool
for a while

be kind
for no reason

and
maybe
even
smile

Liar
Liar
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
tomorrow.

Suggests turning 'over a new leaf' ~ no guarantee - but willing to try. A brief plain plan to create a better tomorrow.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

And as I fall asleep this night

I pledge to be a stellar knight among men;

And at dawn's light I'll snarl and swear

Until I'm calmed by my morning drink {take your pick}.

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Looks good at 4 AM

But how does it hold up in the harsh light of morning? Very nice, Liar.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

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