a bitter bit

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Liar
Liar
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i'm
a
bit

an
on

cut
off

by

an it

that
sits

silent

between

a this
and a that

on the spot

where I'd fit

if it wasn't
for it

that made this
and that split

leaving me, a bit
here with just this

and that over there,
the that that I miss

when the it, that abyss
stole my that, cut me off

flipped my bit, killed my on
strayed away, left me this

blocked my path to that that

so i switched to an off
by collision with it

once an on
now an off

still
a
bit


 

Liar
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A SPOOF ON SEUSS

on a switch. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
^

Clever arrangement of lines. Must have taken some time to format. Fun to Read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I like that this can be read so many ways ...

I love the idea of the binary bits of a byte having feelings: what is it like to have your bit flipped?

Or, the fickle vagaries of a lover, love switching on and off at the whim of emotion.

Nicely done.

Regards, DJ

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A little bit of

Fun word play...

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
you play

with words as though they are your own personal tinker toys!! oh wait, they ARE!! glad you posted this that on that link over there, loved this!!

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