A Final Sunset

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The sunset to me is the one of the beauties of nature,
Something no one or nothing can deny you the pleasure of.
Should I lose my sight today this is one that will be rooted deeply in my mind
From now until the end of my time.

I love the way the sky has it blue haze,
Yet at the same time it has the orange blaze.
So many things can be wrong all around me,
That’s when I just pull out this picture to see.

I don’t claim to be a photographer or an artist,
Just that of certain areas I have the slight gist.
The sunset here is of one that I find so great,
One that I sat and watched while contemplating fate.

Death had claimed a person dear in my life,
And as I sat there staring up at this site in awe,
The only thing that struck me the most,
Was that everyday ends with another sunset somewhere.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THERE WILL ALWAYS BE A FINAL

unknown to those who seen it. TK U MLJ LV NV

heikkoheikkoabout 17 years ago
absolutely beautiful

I could see what you were saying without needing any pictures. wow, i haven't read poetry like that in a long time. it was absolutely beautiful.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
It touched me....

deep inside and not in a sexual way.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Thoughts on viewing an impressive sunset ~ one of many to be encountered in a lifetime.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Thoughts on viewing an impressive sunset ~ one of many to be encountered in a lifetime.

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