A harsh critic

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There are some who confuse the need to rhyme
and force the words as they would force the verse;
They cannot count and will not stress each line,
and never realise they write far worse
than sanity can bear to read; let's close
the browser down; and let us not suppose
that such endeavours may even exist;
Although these authors would try to evoke
some praise for scribbling words, I'd have dismissed:
A moody critic: yes! I hear you choke
back fury, as I lambaste and peruse
these horrid rhymes that I cannot excuse.

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Maria2394Maria2394about 12 years ago
my thoughts

exactly. You deserved the top spot on the list today. well done, SO :)

~maria

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
TO BE A POET

or a proser. TK U MLJ LV NV