A Kiss

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A Kiss

Across the room she
saw him
looking at her
lips. He
liked her
lipstick, was
hanging out
for a kiss.

Melding lips,
melding bodies.
Warmth enveloped her
lingering mind
fancying his body against hers.

He crossed the room,
a direct line
eyes, deep
liquid molten gold

stared at her lips,
her tongue softly stroked
full lower lip.
Eyes stayed on her tongue,
parted lips welcomed his
interest.

Without waiting for
an answer,
without asking the
question,
he leaned forward
traced tingles across her upper lip with his
tongue.

Shivers slithered through her
spine;
chin raised,
eyes open.

Tongue
slipped in
warm mouth,
danced sensual belly
dance
eliciting deep soul moans.

Tracing her teeth,
his mouth first soft,
turned hard, needy against her own.
She sucked his tongue
deep,
the tip trailed
silver sparkles
inside.

Whimpering,
she met his tongue,
rubbed slow,
invited his hot need to
stab her against the cold
wall of his
onslaught.

His musky body
scent assailed her
flared nostrils
hands held head,
fingertips entwined hair,
body trembling
tongue plunging.

Then gently,
carefully,
he slid his tongue from her
moist mouth
staring into
deep aroused
darkness of her
eyes.

"Tonight
you are
mine."

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darthjserdarthjserover 16 years ago
Sensual, delightful

Tastefully done and a hot read!

lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago
A troubling contrast

I have to give you 100% because it flows so effortlessly and achieves what it sets out to achieve. So my response is all about the content (or message) that I think defies being rated by me.<br><br>

It's the decadence that disturbs me, the anonymity of animal attraction given free rein while the human essence is distilled to a single bestial consciousness. It's full of the "wild" but lacking the "sweet." Now this might be simply because it's one moment in a string of endlessly changing moments that make up the totality of of the person represented by the voice of the poem and the poem is like a snapshot which can be highly suggestive without representing the subject at all.<br><br>

Obviously your poem has had quite an impact on me and I can't really discuss it with total objectivity, but, for me, it has that kind of feeling depicted in the movie, <i>Cabaret</i> which explored a growing sexual decadence, a turning away from reality, that coincided with the advancement of fascism in the German polity during the 1930s. There seems to be so much of the same thing happening right now with the fine line between nurture and abuse in relation to sex (perhaps between love and greed would be more accurate) being difficult to sort out. <br><br>

When all is said and done, however, you do write well and all of the above is more musing on current reality than criticism of your poem.

White WarlockWhite Warlockabout 18 years ago
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<WG> Now where have I seen this before Kiwi? Ahhhhhhh Yes! I remember now.... <smiling>

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great Poem

your tale of a simple kiss is everything but simple. You have made a romance out of a passing thing. I adore this poem, and hope you keep writing more!

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
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Ohhh Wild!!

You're getting good at this stuff! Thanks, baby!

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