A Lover's Gift

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When this ends, in marriage or in death,
and you never lay tangled in my legs again,
what I will remember most, and deepest,
is the breath in which you called me friend.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
This poem

is a real gem, it speaks volumes in just 4 lines. Thank you.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
ending

Someone who values friendship over love ~ in life as well as in death.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Did anyone notice

With three extra words,

"in marriage or"

Puts a different feel on this;

It's not just death that'll end this bliss...

Gothica_ExoticaGothica_Exoticaalmost 18 years ago
very moving

I like this, simple, no longer than it needs to be because you conveyed the sentiment so well with the words you used.

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