A Newton Moment

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Liar
Liar
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gravity gives
connects two dots
never meant to merge
sometimes

leaning on the parapet
with a black cup
and a purple thought

a plop disappearing
a drop diluting
and another one
spread in my palm

if it looks like rain
and it feels like rain
but it tastes like
not rain

it might be the tears
of the girl
on the balcony above

gravity gave
connected
and the dot
of my green iris
found a flooded mirror

she didn't drink coffee
but took her tea
with two spoons of sugar
and three spoons of milk

and four hours later
she still loved him
but knew
she wouldn't crumble

wouldn't leak her defeat
from balconies
no more

her cinnamon muffins
can pull tears
from grown men

and she drops one
play catch
gravity gives
parapet to parapet

now and then
for my morning cup
like rain

 

Liar
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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yawn

ZZZZzzzzzz....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So, so

Not really great, but doesn't really blow. Just so so

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
***

exquisite imagery

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
If Eve had met Newton...

...would the serpent still have smiled? I liked this, Liar, because the images flowed nicely off my tongue, and my mind was engaged at the same time.

With the verses running from three to five lines, I had to ask, "Why didn't he make them all four lines long?"

CarillonCarillonover 19 years ago
Thank You

If I had left you a comment when I had first read this poem, the mercury in my little thermometer might not have been so high. I have read this half a dozen times since you posted it, and each time liked it more. I especially enjoyed these lines:

"and the dot

of my green iris

found a flooded mirror"

Thank you for your poem. It's beautiful.

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