a poem on touch

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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

it is to feel
not to see
nails
travel
languidly

connecting
nerve
to nervous

static electricity

as if a grid
almost ohmless
covered me

your fingers
magnetic
pulled
from node
to nothing

heading higher
so insanely slow
sensations trickle
spiral up my spine
along with fingertip
mounted razors

painting
palest pain
as while trailing
dermic traces

lightning strikes
again and again
from haunting hands
to spine cord brain

then
raised neck hairs
meet traced ridge
at journey's end

peaked pressure
subsides

leaving me
in aching abstinence
of those digit
powerspikes

a second
an eternity

until soothing
silk sensation
of a pacifying
open palm
ventures back

to heal
every pinch
recently left

and fine tune
this mortal shell

 

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A most sensuously erotic write

Exploring the power of a teasing touch to arouse

And from that same hand, the power to tamp down such fired up arousal.

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Dancing skin

Adept images of a favorite of mine...nicely done.

~Merry

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
tech-touch

Lovely alliteration, smattered rhyme and wordplay

with a developing metaphor.

The short lines work well with this one.

A fun yet strong read.

Well done!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Panting!!

....deliciously sensual....so many magnificent, tiny phrases. This is a delight.

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenalmost 20 years ago
Yes!

Yes, sweetie. Exactly like that.

~lucky