Adult Concerns

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RisiaSkye
RisiaSkye
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Learning protocol and refinement
involuntary confinement
Attending Very Proper functions &
seeking early retirement

Sucking in information
enduring daily degradation
Countless sleepness nights &
retaining legal representation

Health is neglected
love's been rejected
Even sunshine is unsafe &
they say fould play is suspected

Work place submission
political revision
Praying against violence &
that the cancer's in remission

The house is on a fault line
all I have isn't mine
Mustn't forget the children &
We're all just biding time.

RisiaSkye
RisiaSkye
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3 Comments
duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Hopeless.

Don't worry none about it, folks; 'cause it ain't gonna be all right no how." Hank Williams circa 1950's

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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It may not be meant to be

But this piece sure is depressing

With all these expressions of adult concerns.

Trent_DutchTrent_Dutchalmost 19 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned on the new poems review thread for Tuesday 29th of March (2005). I know its not new, but I used it for my old poem spinner submission. Great poem in my opinion.