Aloneness

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Aloneness
is everywhere,
among everyone,
in crowds
in couples
inescapable

who is in your head
who is in your bed
are they there with you
or among themselves

there is no way of knowing
that dividing line
between you and them
is merely a moment
of self awareness
or conjoinment

feel
this communion
of body to soul,
of half being to whole,
of completion

Know the moment
when touching,
immersing
becomes all consuming
containment,
absorbs and absconds
with the very heart of being
and you become prisoner
willingly
to another
without whom you
cannot be

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
endearing

A blissful state ~ the willing prisoner of the one you love.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Nicely done expressions of sentiments;

How incomplete you are by yourself until joined with the other,

And even in a crowd, without that other, you remain alone.

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Mirageover 19 years ago
Excellent word choices!

You have an excellent way with words! Well Done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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This is very good, tt2u. Profound. Made me think :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Just to let you know I came, I saw, I voted. Nice one,tt2u. I gave it 5.

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