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Click herebarefoot moonwise skyclad
with long strides
upon your sand
I ride
the tides
betide the times
warm night enrobes
in folds enfold
wrapt in darkness
of your eyes
wide spread
everopen
and wanting
to take me in
pull me deep
swallow me whole
hold as the ocean
down within
rapture
as the see
beating softly
on the soft supple sand
of your shore
that which we leave
at the hig tide line
strange relics
odd old shells
of our past
that color our future
as we walk shore
between two worlds
an ever changing border
between me and you
My favorite lines were:
strange relics
odd old shells
of our past
that color our future
The tempo of this poem laps like the ocean, and is soft and relaxed. Great job.
- suitep
I really enjoyed your poem. Especially these lines:
"I ride
the tides
betide the times
warm night enrobes
in folds enfold"
They have a rhythm that just rolls off my tongue.
Thank you.
I really enjoyed your poem. Especially these lines:
"I ride
the tides
betide the times
warm night enrobes
in folds enfold"
They have a rhythm that just rolls off my tongue.
Thank you.