as you are sand and I am sea

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lobomao
lobomao
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barefoot moonwise skyclad
with long strides
upon your sand
I ride
the tides
betide the times
warm night enrobes
in folds enfold
wrapt in darkness
of your eyes
wide spread
everopen
and wanting
to take me in
pull me deep
swallow me whole
hold as the ocean
down within
rapture
as the see
beating softly
on the soft supple sand
of your shore

that which we leave
at the hig tide line
strange relics
odd old shells
of our past
that color our future
as we walk shore
between two worlds
an ever changing border
between me and you

lobomao
lobomao
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suitepsuitepover 18 years ago
beautiful lines

My favorite lines were:

strange relics

odd old shells

of our past

that color our future

The tempo of this poem laps like the ocean, and is soft and relaxed. Great job.

- suitep

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I agree with the others

this is a really nice pen..bluerains

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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I can sea clearly now.

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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I really enjoyed your poem. Especially these lines:

"I ride

the tides

betide the times

warm night enrobes

in folds enfold"

They have a rhythm that just rolls off my tongue.

Thank you.

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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I really enjoyed your poem. Especially these lines:

"I ride

the tides

betide the times

warm night enrobes

in folds enfold"

They have a rhythm that just rolls off my tongue.

Thank you.

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