au to de foe

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twelveoone
twelveoone
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le chat noir's shadow plays, a ghost
on furrowed brow, no how,

no, howl, I play with words
with vague correspondence in truth -

en vogue hilarity ensues -
who, who am I speaking to?

no noblesse on either part
you are or you are not, but still

le chat noir's shadow stays, almost
in shallow bow, low scowl.


authour's note: Don't take it too serious, there is no meaning here.

twelveoone
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DesejoDesejoalmost 10 years ago
Toe de fo-rce

vague, vogue chat noir in shadow.

moi pas comprendre

but I appreciate the word play

cats make no sense anyway.

Oldbear63Oldbear63almost 10 years ago
I'm with Todski on this.

Yep it hurts my brain. Were it not for your comment on a lack of meaning I would likely be doing some research, I guess I'll go back to the simple sexy ones.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years agoAuthor
Let's assume

Your reading is correct, Cleardaynow, does the title and the statement add to it?

Au (or gold) to the foe?

I admit nothing except it has nothing to do with Bon Jovi and even then I might be lying

Bon Jovi does come from Say-er-ville

Regardless, that was an impressive reading, as was Trix's fix.

Truth is it has morphed to become a rather sardonic comment on myself as the protagonist in another poem "empty road" which may never be finished.

pelegrinopelegrinoalmost 10 years ago

I think this is the black cat's comment on ensued vogue hilarity.

I read it like Cleardaynow, but like Tod I'm missing something.

Did they burn the cat in the end?

5ed.

CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
Auto-da-fé

The title is just too close to auto-da-fé for it to be coincidence. Well, I thought auto-da-fé was ritual suicide but, thanks to a quick look at Wikipedia, I now know it is the ritual admission of guilt by the victim of the inquisition prior to execution, burning at the stake in particular. Reminiscent of the Stalin show trials but a common device of kings and tyrannies down through the ages.

Thus I like to read this as Twelveoone’s admission of guilt forced under duress prior to ... Well, I can read it that way if I fucking like, can’t I?

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