Bluest Fields

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BLUEST FIELDS

within bluest fields deep
greener grass breathes
a fertile caress of promise

within bluest fields deep
passion‛s prayer blooms
with wild flowering surrender

within bluest fields deep
succulent steel bows
to sate ravenous hope

within bluest fields deep
haunting hunger blurs
the feral lines of convention

within bluest fields deep
crystalline chaos burns
into naked imagination

sizzling dreams thaw my nights
within the magnetic pools
of bluest fields deep

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE FIELDS OF CLOVER

give off the gentle blue breeze, TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Simple & complex alliteration ~ well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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within bluest fields deep

greener grass breathes

a fertile caress of promise

sounds like someone has been sniffing manure

minsueminsueover 19 years ago
Hypnotic

and simply lovely

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