Bride

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twelveoone
twelveoone
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Damn'd You! I was alone. I had learned to
speak, to laugh. A laughter that mocked like the
sound of splitting ice and you Knew what with
I was inbrued, as you chased across the
icy waste to avenge your wedding night. Your
fear, a race of monsters? Hah! So to the
end wrought, your mind populated by the
thought of your betrothed killed by your begot.

Herr Gott, the cold has a bite. A frost has
formed in your eyes frozen vater. You are
cold; feel the human warmth I felt? Now's the
time - your corpse, your work shall be sizzles on
ice, nothing but wet cinders. Horror? A
foolish tale, like your two lines, best forgot.

Notes: Before you comment on the enjambment, you might want to notice something else is happening here. Before you comment on why is seems familiar, it is based on and rewritten. There are another four lines at the bottom. And anon and tazz: kiss my aß
really now, acid is as acid does, you are here for what?


Black from pitch smoke rose into softly falling snow,
with curtained stare atop a pyre of ship wrecked wood
the creature, crad'ling his father, "Anverlobter"
in flames intoned "so weiß, so weiß, so wunderschön."

twelveoone
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
1201 , so this was inspired by

Frankenstein ?????!!!

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years agoAuthor
Surely Ash

you must have heard of Mary Shelley, not stolen from, but rather rewritten, and I'm glad to see you quickly reverted to comments of no substance.

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
I don't like the note in the middle of the poem or the separation

of what I read as a coda to a sonnet. I think it's a wonderful sonnet. The coda I like less but then I've never cared for Wagner either. But obviously it's a 5. The sonnet really is great. You should read Ted Berrigan's sonnets if you haven't yet.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Mein Gott en Himmel !!

You're spoutin' pure Aryan lingo , these days 1201 !!

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