Broken and Bleeding

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Broken and Bleeding

Deeply in sorrow a broken heart wept
Torn and crushed till nothing was kept
Words of passion tossed about and denied
Until she had nothing, everything died

She sat there alone, weary and lost
Broken and tired from all it had cost
Finally down to the floor she did lay
Waiting for someone to take her away

Giving into the pain, losing the fight
No longer wanting to be so right
Closing her eyes on the pain in her past
Wanting a love, that would only last

Wishing she was silly and wrong
Hoping to go and be carried along
Hours she waited and tried not to cry
Time seemed to crawl, as minutes went by

Cascading Falls of salty tears
Run down a face so full of her fears
Showing the depth of a pain filled heart
Willing to change with one tiny start

He’s closed off the curtain and shut the door
Her words fall upon the cold hard floor
Making a mark, a tear stained streak
No more will her body lay down and be weak

Willful thoughts take her away
Farther she goes, further each day
Furrowing brow creases her face
Until peace surrounds her, in loving grace

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jiminabjiminabover 11 years ago
many years late

But that was really good. And very sad. Thank you. Jim

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Another deeply moving write from the pen of DC. ty

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
tears fall

in a mental squal... touching poetry <deep>

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Sadness such as this can only

come from a big heart! Thanks for sharing yourself with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You were absolutely Right

DC:

This one ranks right up there with the darkest you've written. Lady when your blue you don't go halfway do you? Glad to hear you pulled yourself out of it after it was completed. It was your catharsis. Thank You. Ronnie W.