Close to one's Maker

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Close to one's Maker
in the Lap of Nature
absolutely nude
cool dude
feel the body breath
without fabric , textiles or sheath
the rush of cool breeze
Oxygen if you please
in the Lap of Nature
Close to one's Maker

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years agoAuthor
Harry , d'you realize that's exactly the

Comment Erectus would have made " lets all get nakkid' ......" : i miss Erectus on this site !

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks all of you :

Harry , Tod , Clearday , Oldbear it's so nice to be appreciated by one's peers !!!

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
Excellent, Ashesh!

I feel like this one is more personal than usual for you and that you are opening up more of yourself in your poems. Would love to see a Lesse comment on this. To borrow a phrase - thanks for sharing.

CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Nice one

I agree with Greenmountaineer & Todski. Though not altogether sure it makes me think of meditation as it is so funky. But then I don't meditate - perhaps meditation can be like this!

Well done.

HarryHillHarryHillabout 10 years ago
Let's all get naked

and hang out

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