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Liar
Liar
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................

strip
              this
                            shit

down to digits
        to intention
              nothing more


          me...
            washed clean
        of mud
      that became
                    decades ago
                                    a shield
                          almost
                      but only
                  almost
        merged
                with skin


  you...
      distilled
venom
      boiled dry
          acid evaporated
            knives aside
      claws filed
          down


    kill
your piranha
                          and i'll kill
                                my pariah
so that we
        so close
            for so long

can meet
                and feel

      finally

.................
(Thx to Mr T for instant inspiration)

Liar
Liar
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Let's call a truce and end our war and see if we can once again be friends and maye even more.

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Shedding more than skin

Love how you posted this, conveys the movement of the message very well...nicely done.

~Merry

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Compelling...

Raw, stinging emotion. Tight words that refuse to waver. Very impressive!

Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndealmost 20 years ago
Venom

Rybkaesque, but with razor blade accuracy. Very well done. :)

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