- Erotic Poetry
- Concealment
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Excitement hidden, she looks to each spine-
tingling moment and shows how to give
in through submission, as desired. She'll live
to fulfill each command and each design
he's had on her for years; He will decline
to let her up: her kneeling's so conducive
to renewed power that is not discursive:
he has such uses for her: they'll define
true need; She'll take him in and fill her face:
cheeks sucked in; only enticing when she's
at the heart of his configuration;
He'll be so hard that she must just embrace
him, though she would blush and look abashedly
Down at the floor: concealing excitation...
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerover 11 years agoI don't think there is anyone on Lit who is as consistently good as you have been with erotic poetry. I look forward to seeing your submissions.
Having been admonished recently (and justifiably) for using too many pronouns in a poem, I have to ask (no need to reply; this is a rhetorical question) is there some way you could have personified this male and female sexual energy and inserted those words for a few of the pronouns?
"....her kneeling's so conducive/to renewed power that is not discursive" I really liked.
