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Click hereHungry fingers digging faster
Nails ground ragged and torn
On the asphalt burning so
No relief here never here
For those in need
Palms and knees bloodied
Scraped split and worn
From the pathetic crawl
Beg no more this street
Or its no shelter sun
Just the clash of broken teeth
Feeding only the scorn
Of those that search on and on
Pain well portrayed but I feel excluded, wondering why. A lot of power in a small piece. 5
even if it is painful to read. But we write what we need to write, I understand. Very smooth writing and I really like the gentle use of rhyme and near rhyme, the last two lines especially.
Thank you for the read. :-)