Crushed

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gently at first, it begins.
tender soles rolling across
firm skins, applying pressure.

juice filled orbs
stretch and burst,
warm flesh oozes,exposed

as the weight increases
and the strokes speed
showing no mercy.

life's blood is squeezed,
sweetmeats are trampled
underfoot,wrenching out all

that was once fresh
and succulent, until only
an empty, bitter hull remains.

and having emptied you,
she retires to sip the wine
and consider future harvests.
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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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If you don't know what sweetmeat is, you'll miss much of what's said here. Ouch!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
been awhile...

since i've seen anything from you. i can feel this all the way in rubbing up against my bones to a chill......nicely done.....don

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
So Sad~!!

I loved this sad lil poem~!!

Reaches out, grabbs ya.

Sends ya whirling into the land of the damned~

Imagery is the key here.

So much is said in painting, each stroke of the bitter brush.

Excellent~!!

Very deep ... emotional

More Please~!!

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
Excellent piece

A fabulous read!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

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