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Days Of Gold Turned To Coal

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wakingDown
wakingDown
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Setting sun civilization collapse
      Social evolution turning stagnant
            Advancing beyond perfection to obsession

      Dedication leading to decadence
            Overprotection breeding weakness within
The loss of earned immunity

            Origins now entombed in mystery
Our own beginnings lost
      Earliest lessons betrayed by memory

            Leaving world consciousness to wander
      Aimless and baseless living disarray
These days of gold turned to coal

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3 Comments
HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
liked this one

like the way you writing is evolving

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
doesn't coal turn to diamonds?

Love the shape of your poetry. Good thoughts, well written.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
these days of gold turned to coal

: very evocative , Wakin'down , thnx for sharin' !!

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