- Erotic Poetry
- Define a Line
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Define a line
that curves a subtle
inward arc
intersecting between
warm breath
and an oblique whimper,
the voice, wavering
delicate pathways
undulating
linear tone and
sensation.
Still pining more
to press
an indentation – fill
the silent chasm
with sound
and shape a beginning
deep inside
a single point,
arching into a rhythm,
a line that curves.
- COMMENTS
sweet GA peachesover 16 years agoyou took me in with 'warm breath
and an oblique whimper,'.. and I
finished with whispy warm breath,
scroll up, and read again.. this
was truly a *fantastic* piece of sensual
erotic writing, to my core.. and more.
sGp
Anonymousover 16 years agoI don't have much more to add than previous commenters have said other then saying I appreciate your poetry. This poem is a great example of your work and erotic poetry without being porny. Very sexy, thanks.
LeBrozover 16 years agoEROTIC!!! This is really good, engaging the reader to use his mind to create a highly charged picture. It doesn't use crude and obvious simple vulgarities; it's subtle in its brush strokes and what's happening here is really HOT!
Angelineover 16 years agoI love when it when I see a poet do this: write erotica that really works with no graphic language (and you barely even mention anything human!). Great job! Your poem has been reviewed and recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thank you for the read! :-)
