- Erotic Poetry
- Digital Seduction
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Click hereI picture you,
slouched at your monitor,
eyes riveted, titillating words
of promises and temptation,
secret words exchanged
in darkened seclusion.
Digital seduction embedded
in your hard drive,
chip set on overdrive.
Steamy images trapping
your ravenous gaze,
a sensual kaleidoscope,
tempting you, taunting you,
hijacking your consciousness.
Breath quickening,
tension in your gut,
vivid scenarios
flooding your psyche,
inviting you to play,
one handed typist,
heating the fire in your veins,
burning desire for more,
always more.
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoI’m with Kountry girl on this one. Right on the money for this site, but I could not take this poem (unlike “Need”’s pure erotic celebration) simply as sexual tension/expression. Like Kountry girl I too found too undercurrents which convey more complex approach to the (imagined?) scene. The choice of the language points to a tension between reality and authenticity and something else which is digital embedded in your hard drive, trapped. The suggestion is of distance from either the subject of seduction or its object. Other words suggest compulsiveness lack of full consciousness even humiliation. Good description of solo sex which gives the title an ironic meaning of course.
LeBrozabout 17 years agoNow <B>this</B> is what I'm talking about. This has much more sexual tension than <I>Need</I> and it is believable when you speak of one-handed typing. I never did doubt kountrygirl's estimate of your writing skills; use <I>Need</I> as a valuable writing/learning exercise.
kountrygirlabout 17 years agoI sense undercurrents of emotion with this one. Anger. Disappointment. Disdain maybe? Well done.
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoI vonder how muny sticky keyboardts (oops, I'm using the wrong hand) there are in cyberspace... Nicely done.
