doo-wop for a demigod

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Liar
Liar
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well yeah
doo-wop anything goes

whatever flows
from your fingertips
every odd and other night

tipsy trips travelled
from toreador to torpor
a little Halcion
in a lot of
           hallelujah here comes
           the body shots!

can go a long way

if told
from table tops
panicked parading
sugar iced crystal
one after the other

sneaking down
the sickly sweet
seduction

well yeah
i forgot
doo-wop everything works
when you're a fucking
renaissance rock'n'roll
           (did I say doo-wop?)
shiny superstar
booty call free-for-all
barbie doll

anything, right?
that fans your heated head
and wraps a fiber glass
thread mesh
around the outer limit
of your constitution

us mere morals will remain
to suck up the confusion
like nectar
           or saliva
           or doo-wop whatever works
run over burning,
itching neck
chest
hips
thighs
oh those
thighs

to finally fall
into the puddle
of the rest of us

by your glorious
right on
rock'n'roll
fancy
feet

Liar
Liar
59 Followers
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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Halcion...

is a tight and nasty lil old benzodiazepine, akin to xanax, valium and ativan, only much stronger. in the US, is mainly used in institutional settings as of late... did you mean halcion? :D

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
I loved the doo-wop!

Just wondering... did you mean "Halcyon"?

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
the delivery is splendid.

i enjoyed this piece very much / it is pointed and very controlled / great work /

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Impressive. I enjoyed the delivery and the beat of your words.

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