Doormouse is a Gift From God

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Note: This poem is a double acrostic which celebrates the amazing Doormouse, one of Literotica's most exquisite writers! Thank you Kim, for your inspiration!


Doormouse is a new Gift from GoD
Overwhelming, never merely so-sO
On the top, and she won't let gO
Rising, rising, a brilliant staR
Motivating all of us- Va Va VooM
Openly friendly, and lovely, toO
Utterly exquisite- to me and yoU
She has a light to illuminate uS
Eternally alive-endlessly serenE

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
You're are brilliant.

I still love this, years on.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Intriguing!

Can anyone doubt this wonderful poet has a master's command of the English language. Such an interesting literary form. Well done!

Lisa DentonLisa Dentonover 19 years ago
Very Cute

I liked the way you did the beginning and ending letters to spell her name, so I forgive your major mistake in not mentioning her cute lil tail.

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
OMGGGGGGG

That is gorgeous hon!!!!!

I absolutely love it!!!! What more can I say? lol

Thank you!!!! God now I'm blushing lol

You're such a sweetheart, Dave. Thank you ;-)

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
Very clever...

what a great tribute.

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