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Click hereI walk the streets of downtown,
and everywhere
I see your shadow.
The café we laughed in,
the corner
where you broke your heel,
the quiet bar
that I loved,
and you hated.
The memories come
so thick,
I brush them away
to see the sidewalk.
How fitting
that the places
we were so happy
now make me sad,
and the quiet bar
that you hated
is where I go
to cry over you.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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Now I need a happy one. That really stirs up a lot of emotion. Thanks
It made me feel sad, so it is very good.
It maynot have the wording must people like, I found
it easy to digest and understand. This subject is
about the pain of a broken heart and doesn't need to be
fancy, just the truth. I like how you wrote this. The images are in black and white and seem real.