drenched

and your cloud poem came up before my illustrated cloud poem!

LOL

the picture file got screwed up...oh well next week you'll see that we should have combined them for a complete train of thought! LOL ;)

loved it all of you it was great!

Kisses,

~LB~

grey clouds grow,

droplets accumulate

and a cloud's shower crashes

onto shoulders -

pelting the drenched.

Hmm...

Lebroz said it made him think of someone left in the rain cold with nowhere to go. I felt pain but the last lines tell me something different, so I'm left to just...no, no, no...I'm still thinking pain. <nods and says damn it> This is fairly simple, saldne. <goes for coffee>

the full note at the bottom did not come through, it was a thank you to LeBroz and Wildsweetone for all three of us created the poem, thanks y'all. I am assuming the < grin errased the rest of thew comment

thanks you two, Art~

short and direct and.......piddling?

So I'm biased;

Enough left unsaid to let the reader fill in the blanks;

I see someone caught in the rain,

Cold and shivering

No where to go...