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captivatingly cruel
she draws my eye
frigid yet frail

sun-drenched distraction
oblivious to her
blinding beauty

perilously pristine
peppermint pane-cicles
drip drop from frozen lips

crystal blood
from an icy heart
on ivory eaves

so like my hope
melting in the winter
of passion's promise

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[Finalist in the 1st (Unofficial) Monthly Poetry Contest as outlined on the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum – the challenge being to "[W]rite a poem with a winter theme and find a way of working the view from your window into it." See http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=309230 for details.]
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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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mismusedmismusedabout 19 years ago
Mmm, baby!

Pane-cicles? Passion in the winter gone awry? Do I remember correctly? Wonderful poem, Imp. A professional writer expanding her realm. I like.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
drifting~

Impressive~

I too picked this poem <grin>

I am impressed, had no idea who wrote it

but I loved it, ...drifting an excellent

#1 POEM for Janurary <grin> chilling

I meant drifting~

great job~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Hook!

Isn't that what you say? especially loved:

"...crystal blood

from an icy heart

on ivory eaves..."

beautiful.

cookiejarcookiejarabout 19 years ago
Sigh ...

To write poetry like this is a gift. Wonderful Imp!

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