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Click herecaptivatingly cruel
she draws my eye
frigid yet frail
sun-drenched distraction
oblivious to her
blinding beauty
perilously pristine
peppermint pane-cicles
drip drop from frozen lips
crystal blood
from an icy heart
on ivory eaves
so like my hope
melting in the winter
of passion's promise
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.
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Pane-cicles? Passion in the winter gone awry? Do I remember correctly? Wonderful poem, Imp. A professional writer expanding her realm. I like.
Impressive~
I too picked this poem <grin>
I am impressed, had no idea who wrote it
but I loved it, ...drifting an excellent
#1 POEM for Janurary <grin> chilling
I meant drifting~
great job~
Isn't that what you say? especially loved:
"...crystal blood
from an icy heart
on ivory eaves..."
beautiful.