Eternity Blinks

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Sir_Nathan
Sir_Nathan
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Watching the hands of the clock, tick tock
Waiting for the Day of Judgment
Heavy shoulders carrying the burden of misdemeanours
Unshaven and bloodshot eyes, cheap wine guilty

Moments of lucidity lulled by painted horses rising and falling
Faces flashing by, too old for children’s rides,
Failure to note the scent of roses
Too insignificant for cynical meaningless anecdotes

Seasick on an ocean of shifting ground
The Good Life passing by
Unnecessary repetition
Unnecessary repetition

Purgatory waits with open arms
Tick tock

Sir_Nathan
Sir_Nathan
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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

This is a beautiful poem, very well written :)

flyguy69flyguy69about 19 years ago
Inexorable

You've got to love images like this: "cheap wine guilty"!

This poem nicely evokes the monotony of life moving to judgement. Well done, Sir Nathan!

Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
Wow..

Very visual, and strong! I almost felt like Satan swirling down through the universe, time all that there is once in heaven and now plummeting into the gates of hell... wow.. this was a strong well written write.. thank you

Du~

your poem is mentioned in the Sunday reviews..

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