ex sighs

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Cut this hope from my heart
so that only love remains –
without crushing need
to hold;
to have.

Strip my world of want,
and let me breathe
through scar.

Empty my soul of blood
so that a word, mayhap,
cannot wound.

Catch my passion
as it dries;
as it dies.

~ ~ ~

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Pain...

...like this doesn't sigh, it screams. In the right hands those screams are fuel for art. Apparently your hands are the right hands. A very powerful write.

ty,bd

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
just....just...just.......

brutally excellent. all else has been covered........nicely done......don

cantdogcantdogalmost 19 years ago
Deadly limits to love

The second strophe-- especially hard-hitting.

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~almost 19 years ago
WoW

Seems like it has all been said, it's like the pain of losing a child thats what I think of when Iread this

Thanks

AppleBiterAppleBiteralmost 19 years ago
Beautiful

I loved it . . . nicely done.

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