- Erotic Poetry
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I used a stripper
at the entry-way door
that peeled the finish
like clothes falling.
Following the grain
like feminine curves,
engrossed
in the hard wood.
Satisfied with the nude cherry
I entered the opening,
over the threshold
I splattered my stain.
Pressing it in deeper,
stroking it vibrantly,
till I was content
with the finish.
- COMMENTS
TeeTeeover 16 years agoWhat can I say? Brilliant as always, as if I expected anything less than the best. Thanks for a great read and the huge smile :)
Maria2394over 17 years agoDang!!
I love this image! however, ( yep, suggestion comin')
suppose you leave out "the opening" and the second "I" like this...
Satisfied with the nude cherry
I entered
over the threshold
and splattered my stain.
good work, MET. I am enjoying watching as you grow
hugs,
maria
Anonymousover 17 years agothese wee satires from your wabbit bag...you have gift of metaphoric humor...blue
Anonymousover 17 years agoI love the images you invoke here. The opening verse is classic. Truly erotic.
Tess
Anonymousover 17 years agowas mentioned in the New Poems Reviews of 8-11-06.
Loved this, Art!
Playful and powerful, you clever devil, you!
S&D
