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i am the wine of peace
lingering on your lips
     drink me
     lest i fear

i am the river of hope
drowning you in desire
     swim in me
     lest i doubt

i am the blood of passion
burning in your veins
     flow through me
     lest i cool

i am the sweat of sex
dripping from your chin
     satisfy me
     lest i dry

i am the nectar of night
quenching your thirst
     thank me
     lest i wither

i am the dew of dreams
your morning memory
     savor me
     lest i forget

i am the water of truth
soothing your soul
     hold me
     lest i slip through your fingers

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Laced with...

excited passion..and brings forth beautiful images. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Love's new commandments

breath taking.

im glad i stole these few moments to revel in your words.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
^

Very, very...fluid. I liked.

BelegonBelegonalmost 18 years ago
The Consistent Imagery...

...and the lack of capitalization lend themselves to the vizualization I get when I read this, helping my imagination find it's way to a destination that is uniquely mine...but hopefully somewhere near where you intended the reader to wind up....well done.

hugo_samhugo_samalmost 18 years ago
Smooth

Smooth flow with evident passion expressed well. Thanks

Hugo

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