for a saturday sprite

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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

instinct
got the best
of me

absinthe
got the beast
out you

a cigar
a strange day
three steps into accident
and a spoonful of sex

just add water
stir with love
or artificial sweetener
and serve chilled

delightful dessert
chocolate berries on top
raw punch drunk
ammonia beneath

the blend that makes diaries burn with confusion
i am you are we were somehow a three hour exception

instinct
insight
inspiration

abstracts angel
got the best
of me

 

Liar
Liar
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Good poem

Just a few minor errors that I think were over-looked. Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Excellent!

i love it, missing words and all! Fun poems today, Liar.

fly

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
it's a nice poem

I see someone has already mentioned "got the beast out you."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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absinthe

got the beast

out you

missing a word?

the blend that makes diaries burn with confusion

i am you are we were somehow a three hour exception

commas?

This would've been much better if you proof-read your work before submitting.

impressiveimpressiveabout 19 years ago
This just dances ...

... off my tongue. I've loved it since I saw it on the forum. Very nice, Liar. ~Imp

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