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sack
sack
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Windswept waves
lash the shore

leaving a seed
a precious capsule

high on the dunes
safe from the storm

in due time
tentative growth

arches upward
striving to flourish

but alas!
a foot crushes down

salt spews constantly
birds dig and browse

yet through it all
the tiny seedling

becomes a shrub
and then a tree

life is strong
life is invincible
life will prevail

Good luck to you-

sack
sack
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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Life prevails!

Such a delicate way with words that distills their essense for each reader's own private enjoyment. A Jewel!

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Inspiring

Well done, love the rhythm of this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Bearutifull

Sack, your stuff always is. You do have a way of putting the right words together to make a person feel exactly what you want them to feel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A Poignant Poem

Poignant and heartfelt...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Ah! I found it!

and cried. I'm speechless. (hugs and thank you's)

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