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enraged
Her fire spilling
down
benevolent
one tiny seedling
emerges
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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twelveooneabout 19 years agoI think I know where you going with this, assumption on my part, if so, it may be helpful to break somehow between down and benevolent. I am a little disapponted by the shortness of this, not because, it isn't done well. It is! It may have benefited from just a few more words.
Very good
