God's pissed

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This was no ordinary rain
This was God after an all night bender
pissed, paralytic
sending his urine down
until spent
overflowing rivers
inundating lives
leaving the stench of his binge
on the banks, reeking
wrecking years of effort
by those whose only mistake
was trusting in the mercy
of some unseen deity
whose methods are
somewhat suspect
and motives are beyond
human understanding

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
fuck yeah

this is a great picture!

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
I concur.

The title is too blatant for me, though the double-entendre is fun. How about something out of your first verse... such as "No Ordinary Rain"?

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
There....

...are a lot of powerful thoughts here....I think it needs a different title to do it justice, and a bit of editing. The puctuation is inconsistent. This can be reworked into a better poem, I think, that addresses all these points and also those below. The thoughts are terrific.

Esteban03Esteban03over 19 years ago
Come on.....

....man's greed and the crass stupidity of politicians in sacrificing the planet to oil based economics, have much more to do with wholesale pollution and the eradication of natural resources.

I'd love to see you aim your great ability at the right targets - there's not much time left!

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