goodnight , annie....

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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you've cast
caste
in my face
on two occasions
to criticize Bharat
that is India
my Mother
i responded then
in prose
but retort today
in verse
U decide
which is worse:
You criticize my Motherland
for the inhuman Caste system
while totally forgetting that
your Imperial Riches
your Industrial Revolution
every fucking Imperialist molecule
of Glory
was built on inhuman exploitation
blood sweat and slavery???!!!!!
two hundred years your White ancestors
fucked my Mother
Bharat , that is India
and you : White Brit
have the cheek
to cast
caste
in the face of my Mother?????????
You have sanctimoniously
claimed to have forgiven the 'Germans'
[am sure Boris Becker
and Michael Schumacher
will be grateful
for small mercies???!!!]
but have the Jews
forgiven the Nazis
dear annie
[ not Frank]
do visit the Andaman & Nicobar islands
and their Cellular jail
where your ancestors tortured mine
which would make GITMO pale
in comparison
Don't visit Goa
for your ubiquitous
sun-tan
and gush about
'oooh Taj!'
visit Jallianwallah Baug
and feel the sheer Karma
guilt : the weight of blood
where on Baishakhi
[ Punjabi New Year]
anglo-indian son
of an anglo-indian
scum bitch Gen. Dyer
did fire
and fire
and fire
and fire
on my unarmed compatriots
--men, women , kids
this was not a redneck White
in Kansas bar shooting at
two Indian Techies
whom he thought were
Iranians
this was the famed dreaded
Gorkha regiment valiantly
shootin'
at unarmed Indians
in India
because of a White
mixed breed pig's
arrogance
entitlement
privilege???!!!!
and you 'forgave'
Germans, annie???
Did Germans line up 2000
brits on New Years Day
at Trafalgar square
and shoot them dead???????????
your racist ancestors
had even nominated
the Pig for
a VC????!!!!
even now your
Monarch sports
our looted Koh-i-noor
on her head????
& u dare to say
'forgive'
we stand
annie
on differing sides
of an unbridgeable chasm
and to quote
that Raj apologist
Kipling
'never the twain shall meet'
goodnight, annie
i've a life to live.......
no thanx to your
murderous ancestors who did give
us two hundred years of unmitigated
misery......gudnite

Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 7 years agoAuthor
some more 'info' on caste system courtesy historian-scholar Sayanton Bhowmick

The fraud of the millennium, however, is that 'inhuman caste system' too was a legacy of the Raj, pivotal to their divide-to-rule strategy. Engineered & presided over by that racist eugenicist Herbert Hope Risley over a period of 4 decades, and later instead of discarding it was etched in stone in our colonial constitution of India.

tazz317tazz317about 7 years ago
HISTORY 101 DESCRIBED

as the Classic Digest short version. TK U MLJ LV NV

lorencinolorencinoabout 7 years ago
Sorry, Ashesh

How the hell I ended up spelling Gandhi like that may be attributable to the fact that I was born on August 14th 1947 at 10 pm so I am two hours older than Modern India. I always wondered about that as India achieved independence at the strock of Midnight on August 14th it only began to exist on the 15th and yet I've seen many references to the official date being the 14th. Pakistan's independence from Britain, on the other hand, is officially the 15th. So I may be wrong but an Indian doctor who treated me a few years ago looked at my chart and told me that my birthday was the same as India's. In Salmon Rashdie's novel, Midnight's Children, it is also dated as the 14th. So I think that your date makes more sense but it seems the official date is the 14th. BTW In the hope of bringing peace to you and Annie, I'm going to copy my earlier comment to the forum with the correct spelling of Gandhi, of course.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you , Lorencino!

Your analysis is masterly and my poem was born of pique at a catty slur on Bharat Mata by a Brit lady and so in historical analysis my emotions may not stand the Test of Time : 2 minor quibbles 1. It's Gandhi Not Ghandy and 2. 15th. not 14th. August is our National Birthday when the Brits fled our shores.

Our Greatest Poet the Nobel Laureate Tagore was an Universalist and as much of an anti-nationalist as you are: i'm a little hurt that the titans of this thread have no idea of Rabindranath Tagore

P. S. George tge V knighted him but after Jallianwallah Baug massacre he felt personally humiliated at the naked barbarism displayed brutally by the Raj and he renounced Knighthood!!!

lorencinolorencinoabout 7 years ago
Yes and no

Ashesh9, you know better than I the horrors perpetrated by the British Narco State that paid for its subjugation of Indian with the drugs it forced on the Chinese. And then there is the rest of the Empire upon which the sun never sets, where rapacious plundering and arrogance went hand in hand.

The three hundred years of cruelty in Ireland and the subjugation of the highlanders in Scotland add to the English crimes on the charge sheet and then there is the treatment of the lower classes in the United Kingdom. For the treatment of the lower classes in the home of the Mighty British Imperial thugs stung as badly as the caste system in India.

Then there is the enclosure of the commons and the robbing of their means of subsistence of the English peasants at the dawn of the capitalist economic system. Strangely, the equivalent of the enclosure is happening in India today as farmers lose their land to corporate interests and the despairing act of suicide is rife among Indian farmers—and we are now 4.5 months away from the August 14th when India celebrates its 70th birthday as a modern independent state that was born when the British left in 1947. So it isn't ultimately the British or the Japanese or Pakistan or the Hindus, Moslems or Christians that are the problem it is the global economic system whose teeth have been sharpened by the neoliberal agenda that has ravaged the planet for the past 45 years. The British were not necessary once the capitalist jaggernaut got going and the American state succeeded Britain as the hegemonic state controlling the global economic system. That is why Europe had to loose its colonies—the Americans had a plan for exploitation which could be done without colonies as we have so clearly seen since the end of WWII.

Don't be like the British and substitute Indian Nationalism for British nationalism. Rebel against the very idea of a nationalism that ignores the rights of every single human being on earth to a life of personal dignity and where everyone is allowed to strive to reach their full potential without having to trample over others in order to achieve that.

Don't dismiss Ghandi as relevant to a bygone era. He is as important today as he was in the struggle against British Imperialism.

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