Haze

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RisiaSkye
RisiaSkye
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some days seem so
soaked in grey that it's
hard to imagine a sky
full of stars, or the
colors of smog saturated
sunset. some days it
feels like forever between
breaths, like lingering in
half notes, humming at the
edge of awareness, yet
somehow stifled, squelched,
stilled under some
somnambulant fog,
asleep.

RisiaSkye
RisiaSkye
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wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

AngelineAngelinealmost 17 years ago
Wonderful!

Short, searching, and filled with vivid images.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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Enjoyed how descriptive this was without any heavy emotional overtones.

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