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with Average Gina

Melting cubes the only sound
across the smoky, beer-stale room
jittery fingers chain smoke
amber liquid fogs bleary eyes

she turns; screen door creaks open
steamy air surrounds her allure
girlfriend slides her a knowing grin
smirking, Steam saunters to the jukebox

Muddy Waters moans his aches
pelvises slowly grind their urges
pulsing with a jukejoint throb
sex sweats a humid fervor

Seeing her wrapped in an aura of lust
girlfriend raises a shot glass
winks as the Steam rises
suckling another piece of ice.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
hmmm

no other responses? But this is good. Steamy and kind of sleazy atmosphere.

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