Hello goodbye

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She started Hello
then used my name
and I knew
my reality
would never be the same

Usually it was "honey"
or "darling" or "lover"
followed by how
"there will never be another"

No purrs or growls
or moans of lust,
just this,
"We are over", not even
a farewell kiss

the line went dead
so much left unsaid
my mind went blank
my heart grew numb

my chest heaved
I started to cry
she had gone without even
a simple "Goodbye"

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

Now here's another slightly older,

hello, goodbye

and then it's over.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
a great guy

with a heart as big as yours deserves better.

~Syn

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
bummer

aint that the way it is ?

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
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A reflective piece weighed down by the heavy silence of finality.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
A

nice piece,

well written

and sadly very

realistic lol.

Good work.

~ J

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