Hibernation

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my love lay inside hibernating
waiting for the moment
to be wakened from it's slumber

huddled in the cold
patiently preparing
for the warmth to take

hold, arouse me
with fragrances of scents
signaling romance's rebirth

the dusting of pollen
like fairy glitter, magic
promising metamorphosis

instead it was just a heatwave
a momentary rising
from an early grave

the cold returned. I learned
a lesson. turned
returned to my cave

resigned to a long sleep
waiting for the moment
to be wakened from my slumber
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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 17 years ago
I'll add to that ...

I love the feeling of warmth here, then we get the rug pulled out. Thrown in the cold with just a dream overhead.

Love these images and hate the feeling of being left behind. That's what makes it such a great poem my friend. You have my 5 with this one ...

More Please

and I too am hoping your slumber is short

and full of sweet honey dreams ~

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
may

the polar bear goddess awaken your slumber with her white furry warmth...great images..blue

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
~

Oh, these are really good lines, tungy:

instead it was just a heatwave

a momentary rising

from an early grave

Hope your hibernation is brief. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
tt2u...

....does it again. Is this hopeful? I like to think so. Love is just around the corner.

tess

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A sad tale

To sleep while awaiting love's return

And life rejuvenated.

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