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Click hereNails feather her nape
as warmth unwinds.
Sweat roams a path;
droplets open uncrossed legs,
exposing moist down
in the cool theater.
Lover's hand drifts,
drawn toward the damp.
Lips part.
A single morsel pleases.
Tongue twirls,
mixing sweet and salt.
Circles spread,
widening ripples of response.
Nipples rise
as longing swirls
and quintessence trembles
soft echoes through the shadows.
A puff escapes her lips.
Popcorn rockets in the dark.
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Tristesse2 made suggestions on structure and word choice, improving this piece.
I want to leave a comment, well, one better than this, but for now, just wanted to let you know I loved it. excellent work:)
~~ maria
Hmmm. Not sure about this one. It's well written but I didn't hit it for me but this might be me.
Titillating, fun and clever. I like the juxtaposition of the two lines about "ripples of response" and "nipples rise."