Hidden Theater Steam

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Nails feather her nape
as warmth unwinds.


Sweat roams a path;
droplets open uncrossed legs,
exposing moist down
in the cool theater.

Lover's hand drifts,
drawn toward the damp.

Lips part.
A single morsel pleases.
Tongue twirls,
mixing sweet and salt.

Circles spread,
widening ripples of response.

Nipples rise
as longing swirls
and quintessence trembles
soft echoes through the shadows.

A puff escapes her lips.

Popcorn rockets in the dark.

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Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
better than good

I want to leave a comment, well, one better than this, but for now, just wanted to let you know I loved it. excellent work:)

~~ maria

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
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Hmmm. Not sure about this one. It's well written but I didn't hit it for me but this might be me.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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very clever and sexy to the last bite :)

sandybsandybabout 13 years ago

Titillating, fun and clever. I like the juxtaposition of the two lines about "ripples of response" and "nipples rise."

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Deliciously sexy! ;)

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