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Click herei mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the poetry forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating here is so that it does not affect any following temp ratings. - wildsweetone
Where on Earth have you come from? I would like to see a lot of other work from you, about other topics. But good heavens! The phrase, "making my body weep." My god, you are an incredible poet! And I disagree, politely, that the first line was not needed. That's like saying the boat didn't need the name painted on the back of it. I am severely impressed.
a thought... it doesn't need the last line, sounds stronger without it.
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Nicely done.